Monday, January 17, 2011

four finches

a mayhem of calls,
a madness of shred,
a scatter of husk

and four finches
who will not
tidy their room

2 comments:

  1. I love this one. It seems so serious in the first three lines then the last three invoke a playful image of 4 finch sibligs that really make me smile.

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  2. Thanks, Kuvalaya :) Always happy to deliver a smile!

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